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There was a shooting at Virginia Tech this morning.
No, it's not the anniversary.
This gun works now.
You just had to use the other labels.

We're on the front lines.
Aah, nice. (This about demons
and a Malbec.)
I could fix your eyes with this laser.
Be kind. Be courageous. Listen.
:iconnemonus:
I wanted to write a poem based on overheard words. My work was very obliging today.

I'm not sure if this is in the right category.

It isn't very urban.
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:iconfoxsword:
I agree with misao-chan on the title awesomeness. "Happening to overhear things" is my hobby. :P
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:iconnemonus:
lol thanks.
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:icongreenleafcm:
~greenleafcm Dec 9, 2011  Student General Artist
This is a really neat little poem. Must have been a good day for eavesdropping. ;)
The way you've arranged the different pieces of conversation so that they work together to almost form a new one is great (I don't know if that was your intent at all, but that's what I keep seeing when I read it). Not a word is wasted. :thumbsup: I liked it.
I have no idea about the catagory either...also you're titles for things are always great. ^^
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:iconnemonus:
Thank you. It was. :) That wasn't really the intent but I think it's inevitable in this sort of thing. I liked the contrasts that ended up in this poem: dangerous/innocuous, religious/secular.

Hehe, thanks. These are the sorts of titles I use when I don't know what else to put!
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:iconmisao-chan:
I think that has to be the best poem title ever.

Also I think it counts as "Spoken Word" in the most ironically literal sense.
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:iconnemonus:
:)

It is indeed literal. :P The other category was 'Visual and Found Poetry", which I think is actually for pictures.
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:iconmisao-chan:
That's...also rather ironic. :P
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