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Darth Maul looks up at the creature that is calling itself his brother.

He sees black stripes on a yellow face; hooked, tan horns; orange eyes. He sees black armor like the shell of a turtle. This must be another animal, come to fight Maul for his nest. Maul shivers all over, readying himself to get up. He arcs like a cat.  He tastes the air with his teeth and his tongue. It smells like ashes and fire, but it always does. Maybe, somewhere, there's the tang of speeder exhaust from above, and something electrical.

The creature talks to him. The voice is deep, and the words, garbled. It has shoved its way into his den, and sniffed while it looked at his scrap metal and his fire and his drawings. It is a big, wide-shouldered creature.

Maul has trouble with words sometimes. He remembers that they used to be easy for him, but now they seem to stick and repeat instead of forming into new shapes quickly. The shapes of letters seem to have color and sound of their own.

("Years...and years...and years...")

The creature that calls itself his brother is wearing a blue stone on a leather cord around its neck. If Maul grabbed the cord the necklace would cut into the creature's skin hard enough to hurt it and whip its head forward, at which point Maul could headbutt or bite or scratch or run. Anything.

The creature is talking again, but it doesn't quite feel real. It's as real as the rat corpse in the alley, the hot blood Maul shifted through to find the meat. It's as real as the dirt underneath his fingernails and in the gear embedded in his right thigh. (He will have to fix that leg soon. Things are rusting. He will sort through his pile of metal and make it work again.)

Sometimes, the drawings on the walls are the realest things to him. He makes them with animal blood or clumps of carbon he pulls from the fire. Pictures are simple. Just lines and places with no lines.

The stranger is talking. Maul is deciding whether to kill it or to draw the lines painted on its face on the walls in order to make it feel more real.
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=Xephinetsa-XVI wanted some Darth Maul, and I figured I'd try out the Maul + Savage that I've been wanting to write. This is based on the latest information about next week's Clone Wars episode, but of course it's mostly speculation and need not be considered canon.

It's weird to be going back to writing Maul and I think I have to ease into it, but it's also really nice and familiar.

I'll mature tag for bloodiness if anybody wants me to.

Star Wars (c) Lucasfilm
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=happybunnygurl Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I haven't read such a good fan fic in awhile. I really like it.
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~warpiggg Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Third person present tense? I really, really like the style of this one. You use it a lot, I note, but this feels nice. I don't know how Maul mutilating rats can be considered 'nice', but there you go - that's my brain for you.

I'm about to go on a Nem-fic bender, by the way. Expect inbox full of love :P
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Yep. I write a lot of Maul's stuff in present tense, because he is so immediate. I feel like that's the way he would think. Thanks! :)
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=Xephinetsa Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Also, I don't think it needs a mature tag.
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Mood: Wow! =Xephinetsa Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Another awesome fic from Nem! This is a really interesting portrayal of Maul; not the familiar, menacing and soft-speaking figure he usually is (or was in the movie), and I really like it. I love your ideas about what happened to him afterwards and how he's been living (if it can be called that.) And his first encounter with Savage. Very, very, interesting. I love the way you've written this, with his confused thoughts and jumbled memories of how words used to come to him with ease.

Wow. You write him so well. <3
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Thanks! He apparently goes sortof crazy and loses his memories for a while, so, this is me trying to reconcile that Maul with the one in my head and the one in the movie. Glad you liked it. :)
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=Xephinetsa Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! Yeah, well, fair enough. It makes sense, I think. You did a very good job. (:
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